Now this one hits the nail on the head! I like the action and the water hoops - both sides of the pic offer a story! The colors are cool here too!
I don't know, I think the hoops sort of compete with the kids for the viewer's attention, but the positioning of M & L is great!
the elements are there so technically its there. but the image just isnt strong enough for me. I know the camera isnt water proof and there's no way I would take mine anywhere near that water, but I almost want to be looking out from behind one of those hoops. with like a shot of an out line and the kids closer so I can see more. but i know that I am addicted to close up photos. action is nice and its a nice photo, just doesnt have that WOW
I love this one, Maybe just crop it a little to get a little closer on their face and get that house out of the background.