Cute smiles here! I don't think it is offset enough for me; maybe just a nudge more to the right. While the kids are adorable - the bg is not interesting - it would work if maybe the bg was blurred (but no editing allowed, huh?)
I like this one b/c the bg doesn't compete with the kids... they look so happy!
great picture, loose the TV in the background. I like how the flash brought out those adorable kiddos, but I think oyu probably could h ave used your zoom instead, and then the backgound should have blurred more and been more of a dark backdrop instead of the family room.
SOOOO cute! If it weren't for the tv, but that is easily fixable! I think even zooming in more could've been cute, even getting down a little more and shooting up at their faces.